Book Proposal and Manuscript Reviews
For authors who want more than kind words. Get sharp, actionable feedback that aligns with how publishing actually works.
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These assessments are built for nonfiction and business authors who want smart, market-savvy feedback—not just a redline on their writing. Memoir, self-help, thought leadership, and big-idea titles—I’ve got you.
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Book Proposal Review—$950
For authors preparing to query agents or pitch publishers. Your book proposal isn’t just a summary—it’s a business plan, sales pitch, and sample of your best writing all in one. I’ll review every element for clarity, strength, and market readiness.
You’ll get:
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Review of your full proposal (or up to 15,000 words)
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2–3-page memo covering:
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Concept and hook
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Market positioning
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Competitive titles
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Publishing path fit
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May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.
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Partial Manuscript Review—$950
For authors with 3+ chapters drafted and a clear structure in mind. Ideal if you want strategic feedback before writing your full manuscript.
You’ll get:
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Review of up to 15,000 words, plus your table of contents or chapter outline showing the shape of the whole book
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3–4-page editorial + strategy memo
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Feedback on writing, structure, voice, and market potential
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May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.
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Full Manuscript Review—$2,250
For authors with a completed manuscript (up to 70,000 words). A comprehensive review for authors ready to pressure-test their manuscript.
You’ll get:
· Selective deep read + strategic skim (I read your work the way a publisher does—fast, focused, and always looking for what sells)
· 5–7-page report on:
o Strength of concept, structure, and writing
o Voice, tone, pacing, and reader promise
o Commercial viability and publishing fit
· 60-minute consult to walk through the report
· May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch you can use in proposals or queries (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.
Get in Touch
Ready to make your book pitch-ready?
Fill in the new client form here.
Or reach out to book your spot: sally@sallycollings.com
Looking forward to learning more about your book!