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Book Proposal and Manuscript Reviews

For authors who want more than kind words. Get sharp, actionable feedback that aligns with how publishing actually works.

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These assessments are built for nonfiction and business authors who want smart, market-savvy feedback—not just a redline on their writing. Memoir, self-help, thought leadership, and big-idea titles—I’ve got you.

Book Proposal Review—$950

For authors preparing to query agents or pitch publishers. Your book proposal isn’t just a summary—it’s a business plan, sales pitch, and sample of your best writing all in one. I’ll review every element for clarity, strength, and market readiness.

You’ll get:

  • Review of your full proposal (or up to 15,000 words)

  • 2–3-page memo covering:

    • Concept and hook

    • Market positioning

    • Competitive titles

    • Publishing path fit

  • May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.

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Partial Manuscript Review—$950

For authors with 3+ chapters drafted and a clear structure in mind. Ideal if you want strategic feedback before writing your full manuscript.

You’ll get:

  • Review of up to 15,000 words, plus your table of contents or chapter outline showing the shape of the whole book

  • 3–4-page editorial + strategy memo

  • Feedback on writing, structure, voice, and market potential

  • May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.

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Full Manuscript Review—$2,250

For authors with a completed manuscript (up to 70,000 words). A comprehensive review for authors ready to pressure-test their manuscript.

You’ll get:

·      Selective deep read + strategic skim (I read your work the way a publisher does—fast, focused, and always looking for what sells)

·      5–7-page report on:

o   Strength of concept, structure, and writing

o   Voice, tone, pacing, and reader promise

o   Commercial viability and publishing fit

·      60-minute consult to walk through the report

·      May Special: Includes a polished elevator pitch you can use in proposals or queries (normally a $150 add-on). Because explaining your book shouldn't take longer than writing it.

Get in Touch

Ready to make your book pitch-ready?
Fill in the new client form here.

Or reach out to book your spot: sally@sallycollings.com

Looking forward to learning more about your book!

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